The Imperfect Relationship
Here is another attempt at fiction.
Its called The Imperfect Relationship.
Please leave your comments, good or bad :)
Its called The Imperfect Relationship.
Please leave your comments, good or bad :)
posted by Pi at
3:06 PM
7 Comments:
Nice. Had figured out the twist in the end, but even so, very well written. Arnav could have done with some more character though...
Your short stories reveal a very dark side of thinking..
The idea is good, but the reader can almost 'see' the writer's hand guiding him/her along the story
I liked the story.. and the narration and everything else too.. Will you ever write anything with a happy ending!!
Savitha
Nice Writting i liked it
Who ever wrote this has issues with emotions. The person is attention seeking and thinks life is all about "love". LOVE is synonymous to Sacrifise. Most women think that LOVE is synonymous to attention!. I am the same person who commented on the previous article(I mentioned guys do many things to get into women's pants which you deleted!) Also I made the comment that to truly judge a person..u have to observe how he treats his friends.
-Diablo
I have a question for you. Can you love a man for what he is and not because he loves you? Can you love a person who doesnt pay any attention to you?
Diablo
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