Tuesday, July 25, 2006

A breath of fresh air...

The tunes of a flute at a distance
The colorful falling leaves of Autumn in North Carolina
The spread out plumage of a peacock on a cloudy day during a Rajasthan trip
Home made chocolates in a steel tiffin box
Old greeting cards accumulated for years stored in cabinets covered with cobwebs
Moonlight on a narrow stretch of road
A real white pearl in an oyster fresh from the ocean
Color pencils and plain paper scattered on a table with a yellow mug of hot chocolate
Grandmom's hand on the forehead during high fever
A chubby little baby girl sleeping in the pram, her blonde hair tied in a pink ribbon
A book fair of used books.. books with rusty pages and personal messages
Drive through a forest with the sound of running water at a distance
Walking on dew laden grass at dawn
A sparrow family's daily activities at their nest on a branch right next to my window by my study table
An old teacher who taught me, recognizing and smiling
The tough problem solved after a struggle during a night out before board exams
The smell of wet earth
A room full of antiques in the attic
The open window of a candle lit mud hut where there is no electricity and darkness all around
A folk dance by women in the interiors of a north-east Indian state
A field of wild flowers under the open sky


--- I have been in this extreme negative mood for the past few days. Don't know why...... whatever I was thinking of was dark and claustrophobic. Needed a breath of fresh air. Since it is 90 degrees outside, even that is unobtainable. So decided to recapture random images from the past that have left a permanent impression.

........
For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;

.........


- William Wordsworth

5 comments:

manisun said...

hi

ur poem is so full of nostalgia. dont know why, just felt a block there.. as if life is not moving ahead, its stuck n wont budge.. as if the past was a golden one and now the touch of the same is missing..

Payal said...

I am glad that I could make you smile, Neelanjana,my pleasure completely!

Payal said...

Manisun, try finding moments in your everyday life that can make you smile.... just think about it for sometime.

Vivek Sharma said...

Throw away the two or three cliches (pearl, peacock) and then you'll have a beautifully original poem... just like a breath of fresh air:)

Abhi said...

i dont know who you are or how old you are or whatever. But if all these beautiful moments is something which you could remember, observe and feel in the first place; if all this happened with you and are not just some imitated litterary comparisions.... then i have to say that i really respect the fact that You are so capable of feeling all of it.

You are blessed .. :)